Thanks man, always had a taste for grimdark but with substance and somehow ended up with this, I am still working on it. But yeah thanks for the feedback man. I am also really liking your style, dark and bold with marker finesse.
I like the subject matter, you did a good job with the crossover. The strokes are nice and even and the background supports the foreground well even with all the pink. The line work is pretty smooth too, shows a good amount of confidence. The thing that I think takes away form the picture is the line work in the hair, I know the anime style supports a line heavy style but it takes all the attention away and has become the vocal point. My eyes keep traveling back to the hair even though that's not the thick of the picture. Try more watercolor techniques for better texture so you don't have to rely on lines to convey hair flow or anything similar. Some more highlights would be nice to give the picture some pop, try to keep the line work in the foreground, the cliffside is too dark and merges with the foreground too much losing depth in the picture. Be sure to always keep track of the form, it looks good but her body loses shape in a few spots.